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Curse of the Futa (eBook)
| Curse of the Futa | |
|---|---|
 Curse of the Futa eBook Cover, written by Isabel Baudin | |
| Author(s) | Isabel Baudin |
| Series | Demonic Legion of Futa Succubus |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | March 22, 2023 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 12 Pages |
| ASIN | B0BZG72M4S |
| Preceded by | Touch of the Futa |
| Followed by | Dawn of the Futa |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Curse of the Futa is an eBook written by Isabel Baudin. It is the fourth work in the Demonic Legion of Futa Succubus series by this author. In this work the character Mahalia is a futa Succubus, the character Briana is transformed into being a futa Succubus, and several other mentioned characters are futa Succubi
Overview
- Title: Curse of the Futa
- Author: Isabel Baudin
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 12 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0BZG72M4S
- Publishing Date: March 22, 2023
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Plot Summary
The blood of demons is in her veins, and a special something drives her to seek out victims to make into her thralls. Follow Briana as she lives the life of a Succubus Futa. Will she take the path of seduction, bringing women to her of her own free will, or will Briana take what she desires whether her victims want it or not? Enter the world of a newborn Succubus Futa and take part in her day to day life.
In this chapter of the series, Briana begins to learn more about who and what she is now, and as she learns, she starts to ask some really hard moral questions. It is clear that the new life she must lead is not as easy and cut dry as it first appeared.
This is book four of a Futa on Female series of erotic shorts by author Isabel Baudin. Warning. These books will contain non con and beautiful demonic women who are packing. It is not for the feint of heart.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on May 16, 2023
Briana faces an entirely new existence before her. The world isn’t the same, she’s caught in a web with no escape. Mahalia cursed her to become a futa succubus and Briana’s humanity is slowly being whittled away. There’s no telling what will happen next, but whatever it is, Briana cannot escape her duty to Stacy and the need Mahalia has driven within them both.
Following on immediately from the prior work, the story is somewhat reflective at times for the main character Briana as she is guided by Mahalia in her new existence, forced to come to terms with her fading humanity, and discovers what Mahalia has brought in her wake since arriving on Earth.
Once more the work is very short and there’s little time available to delve into the mental changes that Briana undergoes. It’s a shame because that would have been so much more interesting if her fall could have been explored. Similarly there’s mention of what’s happened to Stacy, but that’s not explored either. She’s an afterthought which again shouldn’t be. Her transformation is past, but she could have been used by Mahalia to press Briana onwards to accept herself as a futa succubus.
There’s also a passage in the work that describes how the world has changed as a result of Mahalia’s arrival. It’s mentioned in passing and then the story turns away from that. Again, there’s a huge amount of storytelling that could have been but wasn’t. This is honestly the largest issue with the series. A lot of really good ideas are dropped in, teased, and then the story moves on and forgets about them.
This is especially true with the closing pages of the story. Mahalia mentions in passing more aspects of Briana’s new form, a source of conflict from others they face as succubi, and then the story ends. Given all of these really good ideas scattered about, there is so much storytelling that needs to be explored and it just can’t be for how short this work is.
Looking back on the series as a whole, the entire work feels like a stream of story ideas, plots and characters told in summary. There’s a lot of good story ideas, but so many of them are mentioned in passing and then left behind to get to the next one. The author would be well served to gather all of the threads and expand on them. What’s offered here really is a tease and not a lot more. That’s the real shame as this could have been so much more and so much better.
Two out of five pitchforks.
The work, like the prior ones in the series, needs another editing pass to clean up the narrative, bring emotion to the dialogue, and give heat to the erotica. There are a lot of plot and character development to explore and perhaps the author will revisit and revise their works into a single volume to add the life needed to make these works be all they offer.