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To Lie Beneath: An Erotic Tale of Horror (eBook)
| To Lie Beneath: An Erotic Tale of Horror | |
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 To Lie Beneath: An Erotic Tale of Horror eBook Cover, written by Meredith Wilson | |
| Author(s) | Meredith Wilson |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | October 15, 2018 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 22 Pages |
| ASIN | B07JG9VG1Z |
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To Lie Beneath: An Erotic Tale of Horror is an eBook written by Meredith Wilson. In this work the character Eleanor is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: To Lie Beneath: An Erotic Tale of Horror
- Author: Meredith Wilson
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 22 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B07JG9VG1Z
- Publishing Date: October 15, 2018
Plot Summary
They were almost of a height with each other. She pulled his mouth into hers and kissed him passionately. Her mouth was warm and opened immediately to him. She flicked her tongue in and out of his mouth and he could taste the remnants of the drink she had had. Their breath mingled in the cold garage as they kissed. Eventually, she broke free. Her mouth redder than before. Her eyelids heavy with pleasure. “Have a good night,” she gave that smirk again as she said it and took her seat behind the wheel. She had left her hand on his shoulder and as she sank in her chair she brought it down slowly across the front of his chest, down his torso, past his belt and eventually rested it on the large bulge in the front of his pants. She gave it a gentle squeeze and winked one of her purple-blue eyes at him. He had crouched down then. She had yet to swing her legs in the car. They were slightly open and her dress had come to her mid thighs.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on November 20, 2018
The book summary really is more of a quote from the work itself. Perhaps a good summary might be: There is a darkness that exists within souls and it attracts those that feed upon them. A choice made, an encounter fated, the end looms with its own judgement.
The work is an erotic horror themed story about an encounter with a succubus and what happens to their prey as the night passes and the succubus takes her fill. The work is very dark, there is really veery little to like about the main character for various reasons and as for the succubus herself, she’s somehow aloof and tender which is such an odd combination.
Eleanor. the succubus of the story, overall isn;t quite evil, more trapped in her own mind of horror and taking what she needs from those that she draws to her. There are no horns or tail to be seen, but she is very much a succubus, there is a bit of mind control, and the feeding aspects are as well. Beyond that, it’s the last few pages when her effects on the main character come to the fore that things take that last turn into being dearly dark and sad which left me somewhat unsurprised with what came before and how it all ended.
Three out of five pitchforks.
The work closes in a very dark place which works with the rest of the story. Overall it is very much horror with some heat than it is eroptica with some horror, but the story still is quite unique. It is a shame that so much about Eleanor is not explored,, but the core of her being a succubus is. Still, the work needs another editing paste, there are a number of word errors and oddities that if corrected, and the story added to a bit more, would make for a better read overall.