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The Legend of Elissa - The Check-Up (eBook)
| The Legend of Elissa - The Check-Up | |
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 The Legend of Elissa - The Check-Up eBook Cover, written by M. Dunn | |
| Author(s) | M. Dunn |
| Series | Elissa |
| Publisher | M. Dunn |
| Publication date | March 20, 2016 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 14 Pages |
| ASIN | B01D8VMKH8 |
| Preceded by | The Legend of Elissa - Pulled Over |
| Followed by | Futa Succubus Joins a Gym |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
The Legend of Elissa - The Check-Up is an eBook written by M. Dunn. It is the second work in the Elissa series by this author. In this work the character Elissa is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: The Legend of Elissa - The Check-Up
- Author: M. Dunn
- Published By: M. Dunn
- Length: 14 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B01D8VMKH8
- Publishing Date: March 20, 2016
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Plot Summary
Elissa is ready for her first annual physical, but when she falls head over heels for a young nurse, who doesn't seem to want our lovely demon, Elissa is forced to come up with another steamy way to seduce young Nurse Lynn. And it involves the Lynn's busty, brunette boss, Doctor Pinler.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on December 2, 2016
Elissa’s day seems to be one in which she spends the day at her doctor’s office. It’s a waste of time, there’s nothing wrong with her and there never will be. She’s a succubus after all and the tests aren’t going to be a problem. However, Elissa being horny and seeing her doctor and nurse nearby, might make for a better morning at least.
The series can be best described as a pair of hot flashes of erotica with a little bit of story to hold them together. In each, Elissa begins her day being miffed at the world before getting herself into a situation where her succubus powers come into play, she mind controls someone, has sex with them, and then leaves. There’s no time spent in telling Elissa’s own past, who she is, other than a futa succubus, and that’s a problem.
She’s an interesting character and it feels like there’s more to tell about her. How she came to be on Earth isn’t explained, how she’s fit into human culture isn’t explored. Overall, really more time is taken in talking about the humans that Elissa encounters than herself. Ellisa is a mystery throughout save for what she can do, which while being the point of the series, isn’t as interesting as things could be.
The mind control aspects of the stories are a bit flat, the erotica has some heat in it, but even so, that heat isn’t enough to overcome a lack of plot and story. The purpose of both works is just to get Ellisa into a situation where she can have fun with some humans and then walk away from the encounter in a better mood.
The works are short, therefore there isn’t a lot of time to be spent outside of the erotica. I think that the author could have written more about Elissa’s past, perhaps talked about her goals being around humans. There needs to be something more about Elissa than just going around and having sex, which is suggested, but isn’t explored. It needs to be.
Two out of five pitchforks.
There’s not enough story about Elissa herself and that’s the problem. She’s a succubus, she has some interesting powers and she’s a futa. Just saying that and not exploring that leaves a lot of story untold. Story matters, there isn’t enough here and there is so much potential in Ellisa’s character. It would be nice for the author to focus on telling more story than just the erotica.