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The Demon Made Her Do It: The Priests (eBook)
| The Demon Made Her Do It: The Priests | |
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 The Demon Made Her Do It: The Priests eBook Cover, written by Charlene Hunt | |
| Author(s) | Charlene Hunt |
| Series | The Demon Made Her Do It |
| Publisher | Smith Associates |
| Publication date | January 18, 2016 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 17 Pages |
| ASIN | B01ATRM1DM |
| Preceded by | The Demon Made Her Do It: Her Best Friend |
| Followed by | The Demon Made Her Do It: The Rugby Team |
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
The Demon Made Her Do It: The Priests is an eBook written by Charlene Hunt. It is the third work in the Demon Made Her Do It series by this author. In this work the character Stygos is an Incubus.
Overview
- Title: The Demon Made Her Do It: The Priests
- Author: Charlene Hunt
- Published By: Smith Associates
- Length: 17 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B01ATRM1DM
- Publishing Date: January 18, 2016
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
- The Demon Made Her Do It: Her Mother's Boyfriend
- The Demon Made Her Do It: Her Best Friend
- The Demon Made Her Do It: The Rugby Team
- The Demon Made Her Do It: The Mad Scientist
Plot Summary
Lacey's back on the streets with no place to stay, but she's not worried. She's pledged her soul to the sex demon Stygos, and she knows he'll take good care of her with all four of his hands - not to mention his wonderfully prehensile tail. His only request? A series of sexual tasks to complete before she can be truly his. Absolutely no problem.
But when her path leads to a church, she can't help but wonder if the demon has any power in such a place. Luckily, she finds a warm welcome from both the priests of the parish, even if it does mean coming in the rear door.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on March 19, 2017
The series is actually two separate situations with two different women having encounters with two different incubi. This seems to have led to some confusion for the author as their book summaries mix up the main characters’ names from the beginning of the series. Beyond that, there’s really no thread that runs through all of these stories, they are a group of hot flashes in which each main character is, for lack of a better word, made to do things via mind control and sexual need.
That isn’t a poor idea for a plot outline, there’s some heat in that, a story to be told, but in this series once the main character is introduced, the slippery slide into the clutches of the evil incubi is relentless. Better than three quarters of the work is centred on what amounts to a porn movie scene as a whole. There’s no story, there’s no development of the characters. The incubi gloat, the women in the series are used in all kinds of different ways in an attempt to quell their need for sex.
And that is, to be honest, very boring. There needs to be story with erotica to make things interesting, but here that doesn’t really come, even if all of the characters do. There are little snippets of ideas which are interesting and really needed to be explored. For example, the terms of service snippet that appears in the later work is really interesting, but it’s never used in the story themselves. The story about Omat and Stygos isn’t told, they are mostly stereotypical incubi that want to toy with their prey and be amused in their reactions.
As well, the sudden shift from one story to another at the third book left me confused as to why that happened. The story of Meredith and Omat never really goes anywhere, which is a shame because that’s the more interesting of the two threads. The erotica is stereotypical in a lot of ways, the heat is barely present. More story could have helped make me care more about the characters and be more involved in the stories themselves.
The characters are cardboard, the story is thin, the erotica has little heat. As a quick piece of erotica, for some that will work, for me it does not. As well, making this a series rather than a single work doesn’t make things better, honestly I think it causes the series to suffer a lot.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
The series is mostly porn movie scenes with a little bit of plot trying to hold it all together. I didn’t really find my way into the series, I didn’t find Lacey interesting or for that matter Stygos either. Meredith isn’t as well, nor is Omat. Hot flashes these works might be, but as things are for story, for plot, for developing the characters, I just didn’t find much of that here.