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Taken By A Demon (eBook II)
| Taken By A Demon | |
|---|---|
 Taken By A Demon eBook Cover, written by Georgia Lucas | |
| Author(s) | Georgia Lucas |
| Series | Virgin's Invocation |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | October 4, 2016 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 15 Pages |
| ASIN | B01M1O4E4Y |
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
Taken By A Demon is an eBook written by Georgia Lucas. It is the first work in the Virgin's Invocation series by this author. In this work one of the characters is an Incubus.
Overview
- Title: Taken By A Demon
- Author: Georgia Lucas
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 15 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B01M1O4E4Y
- Publishing Date: October 4, 2016
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Plot Summary
When college student Rose participates in a silly fertility ritual, she thinks it's all in dumb fun. Little does she know of the true consequences--unknowingly forming a pact with an incubus. She owes her virginity to a demon, and he has the right to enjoy for as long as he pleases.
Can Rose survive the ordeal? Will she be able to gratify this demon of lust before the morning breaks?
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on October 18, 2016
Rose finds herself in the midst of a ceremony that’s supposed to make her sex life better. The thing is that she doesn’t have one to speak of… because she’s never done it before. Still, fun with friends is fun and when it’s over, there no harm done. Except soon after an incubus comes calling and Rose discovers that the summoning is very real and she’s made a deal with the incubus, who intends to collect on it.
The work is rather short, honestly I think there was a lot of opportunity for Rose’s story to be told more outside of her group of friends than it was. Beyond that, Rose is just an interesting character and there’s a lot to like about her. For me, the loss of what makes Rose who she is left a lot behind. Rose has some issues to work through, she has some thoughts and ideas to explore, but the ceremony she gets dragged into pushes that telling away for a little bit of teenage fun and games.
This, of course, leads into Rose a bit later in the work finding herself at the mercy of an incubus that she unknowingly summoned. The incubus, who isn’t named, appears at first rather demonic in appearance before transforming into a sex god who has his way with Rose. He’s very dominant, pushing Rose to her limits, and has one thing in mind which, sadly, is having sex with Rose in every way possible.
The erotica is a pair of hot flashes, mostly focused on the incubus having his way with Rose, but allowing that she has what she wants from the encounter. There are clear hints of stereotypical behavior by the incubus such as Rose not being able to move, he teasing Rose until she submits to him and so on. There’s also a darker side, suggesting that Rose’s situation is dire which can be a theme going forwards as well if the author pushes that point in the series.
I didn’t find the erotica all that hot, really it was a bare simmer for me and I think most of that came from the attitude and dialogue of the incubus himself. He just didn’t interest me, certainly not in the same way that Rose did. He read as being very much one-dimensional and I think he doesn’t need to be. As well, referring to him as incubus throughout the work became bothersome and didn’t allow for any sort of connection to be made with him.
There is a story here and I’d like that story to be more than a night of Rose at the mercy of the incubus. It doesn’t need to be a love story, but it needs to be more than just Rose being used, over and over again which seems to be the theme so far. I can see three really interesting paths for the series, the question is which the author will go with or will they only write about the sex. We’ll see what comes next, if anything does.
Three out of five pitchforks.
There’s an interesting story underneath the erotica that’s trying to come out and I hope that the author manages to do so. Rose has a past to explore, the incubus needs a name, and the question of where all this winds up I think is very open. Because of that I’m hoping the author can avoid making the incubus as stereotypical as he could turn out to be. That doesn’t have to happen, there’s hints it doesn’t but only time, and hopefully another work in this series, will tell.