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Summoning the Tentacle Succubus (eBook)
| Summoning the Tentacle Succubus | |
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 Summoning the Tentacle Succubus eBook Cover, written by Amber Fox | |
| Author(s) | Amber Fox |
| Series | Tentacle Temptation |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | November 29, 2022 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 21 Pages |
| ASIN | B0BNP4XCRZ |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Summoning the Tentacle Succubus is an eBook written by Amber Fox. It is the third work in the Tentacle Temptation series by this author. In this work one of the characters can be described as being a kind of Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Summoning the Tentacle Succubus
- Author: Amber Fox
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 21 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0BNP4XCRZ
- Publishing Date: November 29, 2022
Plot Summary
A mysterious figure visits Lisa, who is captivated by the stranger's hugely pregnant, feminine form. Seeing the visitor's belly swell with slimy tentacles fills Lisa with burning desire. The dominant, shadowy stranger is here to share the squirming tentacles that nest inside of her. Lisa is about to have the sexual awakening of her life. Tentacles will ravage her body, leaving her dripping wet and begging for more as she experiences pleasures beyond her wildest dreams!
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on February 7, 2023
Lisa hides a desire within herself that seems impossible, a need to experience something so far beyond being possible that she’s willing to try summoning a succubus. It’s impossible to resist a succubus when they offer your heart’s desire, whatever the payment will be.
The work mainly focuses on tentacle erotica with the appearance of a succubus to make the events unfold. While there is a succubus, she’s the means to an end and the story focuses less on her than it does with what she can give, or do, to Lisa, the main character.
The succubus, who is never named, is so very interesting in her form and personality. The air of mystery works well, the temptations offered to Lisa are so very well done. She’s dominant, knows exactly what Lisa wants, and how that unfolds is done very well. The problem is that beyond her form, the tentacles and the sex, really so very little is told about her and that seems like a real shame.
The story focuses on the erotica, at first between the succubus and Lisa, the BDSM aspects have some attractive moments, but then the story turns to Lisa having fun with her new found tentacle friends and the succubus vanishes from the story. There are some sparks of heat to be found, but overall the erotica seemed to be missing something and I think that comes to some of the adult movie moments that crop up here and there. Once past those points, and some character development for Lisa comes into play, the story becomes more interesting than it was.
The work could use another editing pass, mostly for adding more heat to the dialogue and perhaps giving the narration by Lisa more life that it has. Both could add a lot to the story and the heat, which would help. At the same time a bit more story with the succubus could make the story more interesting than it was overall.
Three out of five pitchforks.
Something of an odd story with an odd fetish that just didn’t have a lot of heat for me. Still, the succubus herself is interesting, it is a shame her name wasn’t revealed or that really not a lot was told about her overall. For those that enjoy tentacle erotica the story does that well, but as a succubus story it really needs to be something more than it is.