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Night With Incubus (eBook)
| Night With Incubus | |
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 Night With Incubus eBook Cover, written by Anitta Jones | |
| Author(s) | Anitta Jones |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | December 4, 2024 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 36 Pages |
| ASIN | B0DPLKY42P |
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
Night With Incubus is an eBook written by Anitta Jones. In this work one of the characters is an Incubus.
Overview
- Title: Night With Incubus
- Author: Anitta Jones
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 36 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0DPLKY42P
- Publishing Date: December 4, 2024
Plot Summary
The story describes a woman in an ancient library, preparing to summon an incubus using a mysterious and powerful ritual from an old book. After carefully arranging the necessary ingredients, she begins the incantation, and a presence begins to manifest. The incubus appears, both intimidating and alluring, offering to grant her desires in exchange for her submission. The atmosphere shifts as they are transported to a shadowy realm where the incubus seduces her, tempting her to surrender fully to the experience.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on June 13, 2025
A summoning leads to an encounter with an incubus who feeds on desire. But they are never fulfilled and one summoning leads to an encounter unexpected as well.
The work is an erotic fantasy with a focus on an incubus encounter and then follows the incubus onto another encounter before the story comes to a close. The story tends to wander a bit, in search of the next moment between the erotic encounters, and in doing so is a bit of an odd read. The dialogue is a bit flat, the heat is a bit muted, the characters are not quite fleshed out as much as I wanted them to be.
The character who summons the incubus at the beginning of the story is never named, nor is the incubus for that matter. The encounter feels like the passing of two souls in the night, a moment of attraction, and then it sort of peters away and enter the second part of the work with a new character. The incubus turns from pleasuring a woman, to a man, who is given a name as an aside, the heat builds and then the story ends rather abruptly.
The incubus of the work doesn’t feel exactly evil, they are more focused on the sexuality of the one summoning them and the encounter itself. They are dominant in their nature, they control the encounter and story, but there’s a lack of depth to them, a purpose, and the missing of a name is a real shame.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
The work needs another editing pass, mainly to add more emotion to the dialogue and bring out the characters better than they are. The overall work is interesting, but it’s scattered and unsure of what comes next in the story and why It does. It also would have been a good thing to give the incubus a name, to make him more than just a figure in the story with seemingly limited purpose. There’s just a lot to be desired here, most of all the desire itself needs to be freed.