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My Life as a Suburban Succubus (eBook)
| My Life as a Suburban Succubus | |
|---|---|
 My Life as a Suburban Succubus eBook Cover, written by Moira Trurowe | |
| Author(s) | Moira Trurowe |
| Publisher | Moira Trurowe |
| Publication date | March 13, 2023 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 23 Pages |
| ISBN | 9798215467442 |
| ASIN | B0BYZTB6RS |
| Followed by | My Life as a Suburban Succubus 2 |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
My Life as a Suburban Succubus is an eBook written by Moira Trurowe. It is the first work in the My Life as a Suburban Succubus series by this author. In this work one the character Hillary becomes a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: My Life as a Suburban Succubus
- Author: Moira Trurowe
- Published By: Moira Trurowe
- Length: 23 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B0BYZTB6RS
- IBSN: 9798215467442
- Publishing Date: March 13, 2023
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Plot Summary
Before my best friend dragged me to Madam Andromeda's little palm-reading business, I was a forgettable eighteen-year-old girl with a fast food job and no love life to speak of. However, after our visit to the little out-of-the-way palm reader's lair, I'm changed. My body craves more. I can do things with my body now that I've never even dreamt were possible. And now? Now I'm going to have every kinky encounter I've ever dreamt of. And eventually, I'll get my revenge on everyone who ever made the mistake of messing with me — in the sexiest way possible.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on May 19, 2023
One never knows what the future holds. But Hillary and her best friend Jessica find that a fortuneteller is more than she appears to be. Something happens to Hillary which transforms her from being unassuming to being irresistible. Her body transformed, her mind changed for the need that consumes her, there’s no one that can resist this newborn succubus, and she’s hungry.
The work mixes a unique succubus transformation with a mystery, some erotic scenes with lovely heat, and a slight futa theme that overall work well to tell the story. There’s a fair bit of character development and background told that sets up what follows in way that was interesting. While there isn’t any sign of the main character Hillary having horns or a tail, there’s no question of her powers as a succubus beginning to form. It’s that transformation and hunger within her that carries the story towards the climax.
Hillary, the succubus of the story, once transformed is very much a seductress in form and power. Her personality shifts towards being very sexual a being which is quite different from where her story begins. The focus of her powers comes mainly in some well written mind control scenes and a bit of body transformation as well. Beyond her becoming physically a seductress and how her form drives her to sate her needs, there’s also a futa transformation scene. While that worked, at least the transformation aspect, it felt a bit odd and I’m not sure that it needed to happen so soon in the series.
The work might have shown Hillary’s transformation within the story rather than having it happen off the page and just seeing the aftermath. Similarly, the shift mentally towards being a succubus might have been better with some time spent in gathering herself while she chose how she would look when leaving her home. There were points where the story felt too rushed and passed over what felt like important points in a rush to get to the erotica.
There seems to be a lot to build this series on, and I hope that Hillary doesn’t lose herself as I think she might well do. I’m not sure that the futa aspect which appeared really needed to be there, Hillary seemed to be very much a new succubus seductress and I do like that aspect of her.
Three and a half out of five pitchforks.
The heat is delightful, and if the series focuses on Hillary coming to terms with herself, both good and bad, that can be really interesting and I hope what follows will be that and more.