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Incubus Slave (eBook)
| Incubus Slave | |
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 Incubus Slave eBook Cover, written by Carrie Hines | |
| Author(s) | Carrie Hines |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | October 16, 2021 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 26 Pages |
| ASIN | B09JMXHZNX |
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
Incubus Slave is an eBook written by Carrie Hines. In this work the character Anam is an Incubus.
Overview
- Title: Incubus Slave
- Author: Carrie Hines
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 26 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B09JMXHZNX
- Publishing Date: October 16, 2021
Plot Summary
Medea is an amateur witch, chomping at the bit to prove herself to be as good as the queen of all witches, Baba Yaga. Continually underestimated by her teacher and untested by her lessons, she decides one night to engage in unguided, unsupervised high-level witch craft. She summons Anam, an incubus, and challenges him to be her familiar. Should she fail, she'll become his wanton little slave.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on January 18, 2022
Medea is headstrong, impatient and cares little for the advice of her teachers. She’s better than they are, so she believes. But self-belief does not always equal reality and when she summons an incubus to be her familiar, the lessons truly begin.
The work is a slow drawn out burn towards a hot flash erotica story which mainly focuses on the battle, of what there is, between Medea and Anam, the incubus of the story. There are some wonderfully snarky moments between them, the teasing is really well done. There’s a lot of good universe creation and storytelling that made the story work well.
Anam is, for the most part, a bit too stereotypically dominant, he is very much an incubus in his form, language and where he takes the encounter. But it’s too obvious where things are leading to, more so with how self-assured that Medea is and while that works, I would have really liked there to be more to the challenge they find themselves in and the way the story goes.
Written well, the nit that bothers me is that from the opening moments with Medea, there are so many clues and hints of her coming future that when it happens it’s not a surprise and it really needed to be. The way things end there should be a follow on work or series, but that’s not exactly clear at this point. Anam could be a lot more than he seems and certainly Medea could have been far more than the selfish thing she is. Still, that leaves a lot of story waiting, a lot of universe to explore.
Perhaps it will be and if so the first thing I’d like to see is Medea actually learning something, needing help and looking for a means to that. As for Anam, I dearly hope he won’t be as stereotypical as he seems to be turning toward. Both have promise, it’s more a question of if their personalities will allow that or just make this something that’s not interesting and missing so much.
Three and a half out of five pitchforks.
An interesting battle of wills and needs which I hope will be the opening to something greater in the storytelling and the characters themselves.