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Demon Seed (eBook II)
| Demon Seed | |
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 Demon Seed eBook Cover, written by M Wills | |
| Author(s) | M Wills |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | July 13, 2018 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 43 Pages |
| ASIN | B07FLMQL1R |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Demon Seed is an eBook written by M Wills. In this work the character Nadjal is a lust demon but also can be described as a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Demon Seed
- Author: M Wills
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 43 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B07FLMQL1R
- Publishing Date: July 13, 2018
Plot Summary
Jay expects a weekend away with his stepmom, his stepsister, and his cousins to be boring...until he unleashes an ancient demon. She's a lust demon, forced to obey Jay's will and with the ability to possess any woman Jay orders her to.
Jay's weekend just got a whole lot more interesting. With the demon's help he sets out to do everything he's always wanted to do to his three cousins: the blonde cheerleader, the half-Indian nerd, and the stoner hippie chick.
But what Jay doesn't know is that the demon grows stronger with every sexual encounter and is planning to break free of Jay's control and bend the entire world to her will. Can Jay stop her in time? And what--or who?--does he have to do to stop the demon from freeing herself?
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on July 15, 2018
Jay discovers a gem in which the lust demon Nadjal has been trapped for a very long time. Offering the temptation of having control over those around him, Jay’s thoughts turn to his family and what Nadjal could do in their bodies. But not everything has been told to Jay and Nadjal’s plans run deep and beyond Jay’s imagination.
The work is mainly a possession story in which various female characters become the vessels for Nadjal, she uses them to tempt Jay and turn his actions to her benefit. There’s not really much told about Nadjal beyond her being a lust demon, though in many ways she’s a succubus as well. She is a very short point at which her true form is show and then she’s a shadow in the background, toying with Jay and his family to her ends.
As such, this work goes off into some taboo territory, the summary clearly says what that is, and as a result there’s a lot of erotic scenes that come. But they really don’t have a lot of heat, reading very much like a teenaged porn movie scene mixed with a good hint of possession erotica. But the erotica really isn’t backed up with much heat. It becomes the core of the story, the entire work rests upon it and as there’s really not a lot of heat I don’t think it works overall.
The plot overall works, Nadjal plots and schemes, her goals and power growing as the story progresses. But the dialogue is thin, the story needs to be fleshed out more than the erotica allowed I felt. There’s a good deal of building up the story and directing it towards the climax of the work, but there’s a problem when that arrives.
The work just sort of… ends. There’s really not a good resolution to the work and that really is a disappointment. After all the time spent in building up Nadjal and bringing her plans to form, the story just tosses her aside with a short sentence, the aftermath comes with a whimper and the story ends. In truth how it does seems to suggest Nadjal’s story isn’t done, that Jay’s troubles aren’t over but the last few paragraphs felt like the author just rushed to the ending and they really shouldn’t have.
There are some minor editing issues here and there in the work, nothing too distracting, but at some points the mistake did take something away from the story itself. That said, the theme of the work is somewhat taboo, there’s more focus on Jay’s sexual escapades than on Nadjal’s and as a result the story seemed to be missing something throughout.
Three out of five pitchforks.
It’s less a story about a succubus than it is about possession and the loosening of some mortal boundaries. I didn’t really find the heat in the work, Nadjal was a bit too stereotypically evil for my tastes as well.
I’m sure the themes will appeal to some readers, but personally there wasn’t enough succubus erotica for my tastes and if that had been more present in the work, I might have enjoyed it more.