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Appetite (eBook)
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Appetite eBook Cover, written by Shelby Cummings | |
| Author(s) | Shelby Cummings |
| Publisher | Amazon Digital Services |
| Publication date | October 16, 2018 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 2 Pages |
| ASIN | B07JHR5LNG |
For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).
Appetite is an eBook written by Shelby Cummings. In this work the character Suzy is a Succubus.
Overview
- Title: Appetite
- Author: Shelby Cummings
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 2 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B07JHR5LNG
- Publishing Date: October 16, 2018
Plot Summary
A succubus orders a new meal.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on November 18, 2018
the modern age makes things so much simpler for a succubus like Suzy. A click, a swipe and dinner is on. Sometimes it’s far too easy really.
The work is a very short, what I call a pamphlet erotic story with a bit of heat, a little domination, and little succubus mind control around the edges. The story moves very quickly, there’s not a lot of character development before the main characters are entangled and the succubus of the work, Suzy has her way with the other character and the story comes to a close.
It’s difficult to say a lot about Suzy, she is a bit too one-dimensional really, which is a shame. There is a good taste of her personality however and in that comes a bit of attitude and snark which did amuse me. There is also a little mind control and a little succubus power hinted at, but really this could have been a lot more overall than it is.
One out of five pitchforks.
The work is entirely too short, is in too much of a rush and overall there really isn’t much heat to be found. But there is a seed of an idea here and it is one that could be made into a better and longer story with some effort and that would be worth investing time in.