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Amy Summons an Incubus (eBook)
| Amy Summons an Incubus | |
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 Amy Summons an Incubus eBook Cover, written by Depraved Diamond | |
| Author(s) | Depraved Diamond |
| Publisher | Smashwords |
| Publication date | July 5, 2023 |
| Media type | eBook |
| Length | 16 Pages |
| ISBN | 9798201470197 |
For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).
Amy Summons an Incubus is an eBook written by Depraved Diamond. In this work one of the characters is an Incubus.
Overview
- Title: Amy Summons an Incubus
- Author: Depraved Diamond
- Published By: Smashwords
- Length: 16 Pages
- Format: eBook
- IBSN: 9798201470197
- Publishing Date: July 5, 2023
Plot Summary
Frustrated with her average college life, Amy tries a spell to summon an incubus. Things take a turn when the incubus distorts Amy’s wish to her into a sex-crazed bimbo that draws attention wherever she goes. And tonight, Amy plans to head to the tennis team’s party for some hot action.
Book Review
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on December 8, 2023
It’s a bad thing to be bored, you tend to run into things that might give you ideas. Amy’s found herself a book that promises there is magic within the pages. Summoning an incubus seems like a good idea to relive her frustrations. But what you wish for isn’t always what you get and Amy will be a lot more fun now.
The work is a very short bimbo transformation story which mainly focuses on Amy being transformed by the incubus, then being taken by him over and over before the encounter ends. What follows for the rest of the book is Amy’s fall into being a complete bimbo and then being entwined with as many men as possible to scratch her newfound itch.
The transformation aspect is a bit thin in the physical descriptions, the mental changes are a little more detailed. Once past the point of her setting out on her quest to be used in everyday she can be, the erotica over the book has heat and tells a really well told bimbo sex story.
The incubus of the work, who is never named, is not quite a stereotypical one. He’s more of a mischief maker who uses every wish from Amy to turn her more and more sexual, then have his way with her, push her transformation further and then abandon her. It’s a shame that scene is as short as it is, because I enjoyed the reshaping, mind control and transformational story telling more than the simple erotica later in the story.
It’s a shame the work is so short as there seems to be a lot of plot threads that could have been explored or left open but really weren’t. For example, Amy is transformed into a bimbo, but she lives with roommates and the means by which she summoned the incubus is still there. Who’s to say that she couldn’t have summoned the incubus back to transform her roommates as well?
Possibly the more interesting idea which feels like it could be possible, would be Amy to be beginning to transform into a succubus or possessed by one. That would have taken the story in another direction, but the erotica and bimbo aspects would still work. There’s just a lot of plot ideas that could be used to create a second work and continue her story.
Still, this is a bimbo transformation story with an incubus as the catalyst. Yes the incubus is part of the story, but the transformation could have been done by a spell in the book or some other means and the same thing likely would have happened.
Two and a half out of five pitchforks.
As a hot flash erotic work, the heat is good, the story has interesting characters. The transformation scene is well done, if shorter than I would have liked it to be. The incubus however just isn’t in the story enough which leaves a lot to be desired overall and I wish there had been more of the incubus to make the title means something.