http://succubus.net/wiki/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=Succubus_Rising_%28eBook_II%29Succubus Rising (eBook II) - Revision history2026-06-04T06:14:35ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.43.8http://succubus.net/wiki/index.php?title=Succubus_Rising_(eBook_II)&diff=34439&oldid=prevTeraS at 16:04, 29 May 20152015-05-29T16:04:14Z<p></p>
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'''Succubus Rising''' is an eBook written by Camdra Abott. It is the first work in the ''Broken World'' series by this author. In this work one of the characters is a Succubus.<br />
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== Overview ==<br />
*Title: Succubus Rising<br />
*Author: Camdra Abott<br />
*Published By: Amazon Digital Services<br />
*Length: 64 Pages<br />
*Format: eBook<br />
*ASIN: B00WCIZ51M<br />
*Publishing Date: April 18, 2015<br />
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==Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki==<br />
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== Plot Summary ==<br />
A young mage becomes embroiled in a fight for survival in a world turned hostile. Making a pact with a succubus and gathering a small group of survivors he fights and fucks his way through the remains of his world. <br />
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== Book Review ==<br />
''At the time of this article's entry in the SuccuWiki, no review was available. Tera has this work on her reading list and will review it shortly.''<br />
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*[http://www.amazon.com/Succubus-Rising-Broken-World-Book-ebook/dp/B00WCIZ51M/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com]</div>TeraS