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<tr><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="−"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>''<del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">At </del>the <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">time </del>of <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">this article's entry </del>in the <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">SuccuWiki</del>, <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">no review was available</del>. <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">Tera has this work </del>on her <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">reading list </del>and <del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">will review it shortly</del>.<del style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">''</del></div></td><td class="diff-marker" data-marker="+"></td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>''<ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2022/09/27/a-review-of-midnight-visitor-by-bonnie-atwell/ September 27, 2022]''</ins></div></td></tr>
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''For other uses of the word [[Succubus]], see [[Succubus (disambiguation)]].''<br />
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'''Midnight Visitor''' is an eBook written by Bonnie Atwell. In this work the character Xerora is a Succubus.<br />
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== Overview ==<br />
*Title: Midnight Visitor<br />
*Author: Bonnie Atwell<br />
*Published By: Amazon Digital Services<br />
*Length: 19 Pages<br />
*Format: eBook<br />
*ASIN: B0B1LKDGXT<br />
*Publishing Date: May 17, 2022<br />
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== Plot Summary ==<br />
Xerora's not like other succubi. She doesn't sit on people while they sleep, and she doesn't suck the life out of them. She could, if she wanted, drain someone to death. There were some of her kind that did such things. But Xerora much prefers to keep a list of the mortals who have fed her the best lust. That way, she can make return visits.<br />
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One night, the "trail of depravity" lures her to a quiet village she's never visited before. There, she peeks in on a human named Colette.<br />
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Colette is the village baker. The villagers frown on her as a woman running her own business. But her baked goods are irresistible and addicting. Any man or woman would be lucky to become the object of the baker's affections. But for some reason, Colette keeps to herself. She's friendly to all of her customers, but she never pursues anything outside of business. The succubus Xerora, quite by accident, is about to find out why. She'll get more than just one meal in the process.<br />
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== Book Review ==<br />
''At the time of this article's entry in the SuccuWiki, no review was available. Tera has this work on her reading list and will review it shortly.''<br />
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== External Links ==<br />
*[https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0B1LKDGXT/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com]</div>TeraS