http://succubus.net/wiki/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=Breaking_Hell%27s_Rules_%28eBook%29Breaking Hell's Rules (eBook) - Revision history2026-08-11T09:35:37ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.43.8http://succubus.net/wiki/index.php?title=Breaking_Hell%27s_Rules_(eBook)&diff=42893&oldid=prevTeraS at 04:36, 17 June 20172017-06-17T04:36:14Z<p></p>
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'''Breaking Hell's Rules''' is an eBook written by Lyssa Dering. In this work the character Reth is a Succubus.<br />
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== Overview ==<br />
*Title: Breaking Hell's Rules<br />
*Author: Lyssa Dering<br />
*Published By: Amazon Digital Services<br />
*Length: 84 Pages<br />
*Format: eBook<br />
*ASIN: B01IWLJ554<br />
*Publishing Date: October 10, 2016<br />
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== Plot Summary ==<br />
Freedom wasn't supposed to be this dangerous...<br />
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When succubus Reth finally meets their soul quota and gains freedom from Hell, they decide to take up residence in New Orleans. Immediately they discard the body they've been wearing since 1952 and slip into something a little more virile, pleased to find they get a cozy apartment for their trouble. Too bad the apartment has a joint lease with their body's ex-boyfriend Jude.<br />
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Jude is walking around with a black eye and a bad attitude, and when Reth tries to explain things, Jude doesn't believe them. Plus, he refuses to move out. Reth doesn't want to take Jude's soul, and they really like this body. So they show him some succubus action minus the soul-grabbing, hoping to scare him off.<br />
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But they never expected for the mortal to take a liking to them. And they never could have predicted just how pure Jude's soul would be. When Reth unwittingly commits a sin against Lucifer, they'll need Jude's help to avoid an eternity of suffering... For them both.<br />
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== Book Review ==<br />
''At the time of this article's entry in the SuccuWiki, no review was available. Tera has this work on her reading list and will review it shortly.''<br />
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*[https://www.amazon.com/Breaking-Hells-Rules-Lyssa-Dering-ebook/dp/B01IWLJ554/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com]</div>TeraS