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== Book Review == | == Book Review == | ||
''At the | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2021/10/19/a-review-of-submitting-to-a-succubus-by-riley-paine/ October 19, 2021]'' | ||
Matt is led to discover a book which offers a means to summon a succubus. At first it seems a joke, but then his dreams cannot be forgotten and when the succubus herself finally appears, a choice needs to be made. Give in to her, or lose himself to her. Either way Lily will have what she desires from her new found toy. | |||
The work is very much focused on female domination with some succubus aspects. It tends towards harsh domination for the most part which reflects Lily, the succubus of the work’s, personality. The erotica reads more like a series of hot flashes mixed with moments of introspection and consideration by Matt. It’s interesting how Lily appears, how she entwines herself into his thoughts and then leads Matt to falling to her control. | |||
That part of the work is where the heat tends to remain overall. While there is some BDSM aspects as well, they feel a bit forced and didn’t have much appeal to me. That’s mainly because some of the binding Matt goes through just didn’t have heat for me. Setting that aside, there is heat, it simmers throughout and there are some scenes that I think worked really well. | |||
Lily herself is not at all stereotypical and makes it clear she doesn’t kill through her encounters, but at the same time she’s very clear on what she wants and needs. It’s a slightly different take on the good succubus theme and it works well here to make her a force within the story and one that Matt is really not able to forget or ignore. | |||
I like the overall story and Lily is delightful and unique as a succubus. I do think there’s a bit left unsaid that could have been expanded on however. Certainly Lily herself might have been a bit more seductive and dominant than she is. But that all leaves a path to a follow on story which would be nice to see. | |||
Three and a half out of five pitchforks. | |||
It’s something different both in telling of dominance and succubi. I’d have liked more heat, more seduction before the erotica came into play. Certainly a good read save for a few little things that bothered me along the way. | |||
I’m going to hope that the series returns to Lily and Matt, perhaps to tell of her side of the story, or at least her side of reality. I think that would be interesting to see. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.amazon.com/Halloween-Femdom-Featuring-Chastity-Discipline-ebook/dp/B09K3VNHR1/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[https://www.amazon.com/Halloween-Femdom-Featuring-Chastity-Discipline-ebook/dp/B09K3VNHR1/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||