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== Book Review == | == Book Review == | ||
'' | ''The following review was published by Tera on her Blog, [http://www.succubus.net/blog/2013/02/03/a-review-of-a-wild-night-with-the-succubus-by-jillian-cumming/ A Succubi's Tale on February 3, 2013]'' | ||
Gabe is a student who is translating a book he has been given. He becomes entranced by an image of a woman in the book and that image begins to take over his world… | |||
I’ve often wondered how to write a Succubus, but not actually tell about her. This author manages to hint at what the Succubus in this story looks like. There is never a complete description of her, so in total she is a mystery. There are descriptions of her eyes in the image of her in the book, but otherwise there really isn’t that much of her told in what Gabe can see. For the most part it’s all feel. | |||
The feel of her skin, her lips, the things that she does to Gabe through the story after she is summoned, but also the things she does to his mind to make him do so. What’s more interesting to me is that she is a Succubus, but she does not claim his soul or kill him as happens in many stories about Succubi. I enjoyed that as it made a hot erotic story even better. | |||
Gabe’s summoning is interesting, I will never look at the stove in my kitchen the same way again I can tell you. What’s more interesting is that how Gabe summons her makes her what she is. She is, not evil per se, but she is dominant, and a bit rough in the sex that she enjoys which seems to match Gabe’s personal likes very well. I do wonder if his calling her Mistress towards the end of the story was the point where the Succubus decided not to take his soul or life and make him her plaything… even if he doesn’t realize it. | |||
Well written, very hot scenes that I enjoyed very much. But like all stories that are short ones, I want to see more. I want to know what this Succubus’ name is, what she looks like, and what her plans are with regards to Gabe. | |||
I believe there is more to be told in this story… It’s a shame that the author didn’t write more. | |||
I’m giving this work four and a half out of five pitchforks. | |||
A hot story that would easily lead into a much longer one and I think that this author really should have done so. Much too short and the addition of a sample of another of this author’s works I think could have been deleted and the main story lengthened. But, for heat and style, this is a wonderful piece of writing that I enjoyed… | |||
Why is it that good stories have to be ended too soon? | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/173018 This work in Various Formats at Smashwords.com] | *[https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/173018 This work in Various Formats at Smashwords.com] | ||
*[http://www.amazon.com/A-Wild-Night-Succubus-ebook/dp/B008C9ILCK/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[http://www.amazon.com/A-Wild-Night-Succubus-ebook/dp/B008C9ILCK/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||